Tuesday, November 27, 2007
Advantages of Playing Sports
Sports have been around in this world for thousands of years ago. Sports have evolved throughout the years. They appeared in the ancient festivals, modern Olympics, school playing yards and in every household. Sports have been introduced to everyone and every country. They are played by everyone from the little kid to an elder. Sports have had and always will have influence in the lives of many people. Many people love to play and watch sports. There are three major advantages of playing sports. The include are to help develop physical skills, make new friends and bring wealth.
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Hi~! I'm Mira.
How about my opinions? *^^*
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every household
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countless adv.(or)
a number of adv.
the thesis statement should be changed. you can write " three advantages of playing sports are to help develop physical skills, make new friends and bring wealth."
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